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Jul 7, 2017, 09:19 PM
What do you think of this Picture, I got bored so I staged a felony Stop / Arrest. I just wanted you guys to give me some opinions.

PS: I know it is not great and all, but since I already did it I want to get some feedback. Good or Bad, I don't care.

https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/f...=969437728

UPDATE:
- Changed several poses/stances as suggested
- Fixed the lighting issue (For some reason green color)
- Removed blood
- Added Police Perspective
- Officers are now in cover
- Changed distance (I don't know if you meant that by "Space")
- Slight change to suspects legs, to make it look a teeny tiny bit more real (It is a small af change though)
- Decreased light intensity

Give me your opinions.

Police Perspective:
https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/7656...5927904862

Suspect Perspective 1 (Right behind):

https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/7656...5927920472

Suspect Perspective 2 (A bit behind):
https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/7656...5927928126

Suspect Perspective 3 (Further behind):
https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/7656...5927931371

Or if you like it with some Effects on:

Suspect Perspective:
https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/7656...5929292014

Police Perspective:
https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/7656...5929298818
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Jul 8, 2017, 01:09 AM
Most of the cops are standing in the same pose, not behind cover. Also the suspect is bleeding but still surrenders in the middle of the road?

Rest looks good.
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Jul 8, 2017, 01:11 AM
Looks pretty dope, minor details that could've been different but definitely looks like a professional picture
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Jul 8, 2017, 07:20 AM
- Random green light
- Lights are generally too powerful (The ones reflecting onto the ground)
- repeating stance in all models
- The stance model isn't realistic nor cinematic. You have like the ugly center. Either make it a realistic pose by having most
of the shooters having their chest facing forward (Where their body armor is most effective) or choose the cinematic
look of side leaning into the gun heavily (which does look better in these).
- The blood isn't needed if the suspect is in a giving up position
- (This is a personal one) Too big of space. Just don't like it.
- Suspect's model looks like a plastic statue.

Other than those, the photo is kinda good. Color is fair and the scene is nice, but it needs work.
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Jul 8, 2017, 09:40 AM
I dont really like the camera angle
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Jul 8, 2017, 10:58 AM
(Jul 8, 2017, 09:40 AM)Vimpto Wrote: I dont really like the camera angle

Any suggestion for a better one?
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Jul 8, 2017, 11:10 AM
(Jul 8, 2017, 10:58 AM)RageSquid Wrote:
(Jul 8, 2017, 09:40 AM)Vimpto Wrote: I dont really like the camera angle

Any suggestion for a better one?
I suggest having the camera just behind the suspect. so the cops would be on the background. maybe add a little blur effect to the background to make it more dramatic..
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Jul 8, 2017, 11:13 AM
(Jul 8, 2017, 10:58 AM)RageSquid Wrote:
(Jul 8, 2017, 09:40 AM)Vimpto Wrote: I dont really like the camera angle

Any suggestion for a better one?
To the side or from the police angle
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Jul 8, 2017, 04:25 PM
Updated it, make sure to keep giving me your opinions.
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#10
Jul 8, 2017, 07:45 PM
this is lit my dude, you should post something on how to make one
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