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Evo News #4! - Vimpto - Dec 5, 2016
Welcome to evo news #4! We have 2 VERY exciting stories today, lets get into them!
Story#1
Rumours have started spreading around that nexus used to be a mental asylum! Investigators also have proof to back themselves up! Images down below!
Story#2
Images:
![[Image: 05D5A1FCFAB198D4F5CAAF8CE6AA2282B06DF1E9]](https://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/111858251447211468/05D5A1FCFAB198D4F5CAAF8CE6AA2282B06DF1E9/)
![[Image: 081341C8C09E9E8E2B9D81FF120F46529FCD7E5E]](https://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/111858251447212001/081341C8C09E9E8E2B9D81FF120F46529FCD7E5E/)
![[Image: B7867335386D57961DDF131CEF6051239767DC87]](https://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/111858251447212933/B7867335386D57961DDF131CEF6051239767DC87/)
RE: Evo News #4! - Ilias S. - Dec 5, 2016
Nice job!
RE: Evo News #4! - Daley - Dec 5, 2016
I like the outro music.
RE: Evo News #4! - Midget. - Dec 6, 2016
+1 for effort!
RE: Evo News #4! - Soviethooves - Dec 6, 2016
Some more criticism, try to crop out the fraps markings on the footage and always double check for spelling mistakes. Don't forget also to develop the story with more details. The story you have depicted in the video seems like a random bunch of clowns dressed up and shot a bunch of SRU and called themselves terrorists. Hope to see your improvements and don't stop practicing!